The lead (first 100 words)

The headline earned the click. The lead, the first 100 words, earns the next five minutes. Lose the lead and no amount of body copy saves you. Every master copywriter talks about the lead as the second-most-important section after the headline, and explicitly said the first sentence's only job is to make the reader read the second sentence.

What the lead must do

  1. Deliver on the headline. If the headline promised a benefit, the lead starts delivering it.
  2. Build connection. The reader recognizes themselves in the first lines.
  3. Create momentum. Each sentence pulls into the next. Short, clear, declarative.
  4. Establish trust. The lead is where skepticism peaks. A specific claim, a specific detail, or a concrete story lowers it.

The six lead types

Classical direct-response teaching codifies the main lead types used in the field. These have proven durable across a century of copy:

1. Offer lead

Open with the offer itself. "For $97, you can get the complete [thing]." Works when the prospect is already stage 5, most aware. Minimal persuasion, just information.

2. Promise lead

Open with the big benefit restated. "You're about to learn exactly how to [outcome]." Direct, simple. Works in stage 1–2 markets.

3. Problem-solution lead

Open with the problem the reader feels. "You've been told that [common belief]. It's wrong, and here's why." Works in most markets. Sets up a mechanism reveal later.

4. Story lead

Open with a scene. Specific character, specific moment. "At 11pm on a Tuesday, Sarah was staring at her dashboard…" Works when the story directly mirrors the reader's situation. The classic copywriters used this constantly.

5. Secret / curiosity lead

Open with an intriguing claim or fact that demands explanation. "There's a specific 3-minute sequence that the top 1% of sales reps run. Most managers never teach it, most reps never discover it."

6. Proclamation / news lead

Announce something. "As of January 2026, the rules of paid acquisition on [platform] have changed, here's what it means for your business." Works when there's genuinely news.

The "you" lead

A rule across all lead types: lead with "you." The word "you" in sentence 1 pulls the reader in; "I" or "we" pushes them away. Most first-time copywriters write leads about themselves. Rewrite every self-referential sentence until "you" is the subject.

Lead structure, the 100-word budget

Break the first 100 words into chunks:

This isn't a rigid template; it's a rhythm. Read winning direct-response copy and you'll see this shape repeatedly.

The opening sentence's burden

The test: "The only job of the first sentence is to make you read the second sentence. The only job of the second sentence is to make you read the third." Apply this literally. Audit your opening sentence, does it actually make the reader want the next one?

Weak opening:
"Running a business is hard. There are many challenges."

Strong opening:
"At 2:14am last Tuesday, Kevin's phone buzzed. Another refund request, the seventh this week."

Lead patterns that work in 2026

Specificity and sensory detail

Specific time, specific place, specific feeling. "Your CRM dashboard at 5pm on a Friday" beats "the end of a long week." Modern readers have seen every cliché. Specificity breaks through.

The admission

Admit something unexpected up front. "Most of what you've been told about [thing] is wrong, and I've been part of telling you." The unexpected candor earns trust.

The unconventional claim

State something that contradicts the market's default belief. "The best sales reps I've ever hired didn't go to college. Here's the pattern." Contrarian + specific.

The direct question

Ask a question the reader must answer in their head. "When's the last time you measured your customer acquisition cost, not blended, but by channel?" Engages the reader's mind in a way a statement doesn't.

What to avoid in the lead

Rewriting a weak lead

  1. Cut the first paragraph. Seriously. 80% of the time your lead starts in paragraph 2.
  2. Put the reader's pain or situation in sentence 1.
  3. Use "you" before "I" or "we."
  4. Add one specific detail, a number, a moment, a scene.
  5. Read aloud. If you'd skim past it as a reader, rewrite again.

Related: Headlines · Body copy · AIDA, PAS, PASTOR · Story selling